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pebble in a shoe [shadorma]
shadowlessfigments embodyforgottenpromisesprovoked by ennui toquerulous friction
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So well done and so correct, forgotten or nonkept promises do irritate like a pebble in the shoe. You used the form well and I enjoyed this poem thoroughly. Thanks so much for sharing it...Angel
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Like the way the piece lives up to the title...and the use of language to convey the image... Exit light...Enter night...Take my hand...We're off to never-never land...Welcome to...The Maelstrom...
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